Secondly, the accessories. I didn't see any spelling mistakes. Really good George, there were no spelling mistakes I could see. It has quite a bit of mess on top of the cabinet and next to the cabinet is white and black draws which holds my books and other things and above the drawers is a colorful kite. It feels like an environment that I like to be in. My mum sees I have to clean my room each day. But that's not the only thing built in to the wall there is also a reading light that can be spun and moved around into different places, but not all my accessories are new such as the hulk that has been stuck to the window by a suction cup, that's a horrendous 6 years old! I like her use of descriptive words and the slight humour. It is a large room that comes out of the side but barely gets any sunlight and heat. It is one of the few places I feel confident to be me and feel as though no-one else can touch me. You just need to open up your curtains more to get the better light. Your Bedroom Ideas are very elaborated and the descriptive part of it has been written very well. My room has lots of colour in it. There is a leather chest that I dump all my clothes on, and a bunch of tools and motorbike gear in the gray shelving unit. Im about to take you on a tour around my room. The place that I hang out in, do homework and well of course, sleep. There is a famous song with the line Home is wherever Im with you. You only had three simple senses that were not very detailed and I think you could have added more detail about the noise and smell and sight in your room. Everywhere you look, a dolphin peers back at you from the ethereal underwater scene of a poster. Don't fix up anything that's awesome. (The shark's teeth are sharp.) I also enjoy the posters in my room, they describe who I am inspired by and what I also like. It is placed next to my bed and upon it is a long, skinny lamp with pink polka dots on it. the shape of her room. Maybe next time try to write more in some paragraphs, and tell us about more things. My room is the perfect size for all my things and for me and thats how I like it. Next time your could probably add some more descriptive words, not saying that there was not any but just add some more in like more bigger descriptive words. I noticed that most of your words you could spell right. James, I liked the way you structured your paragraphs and the whole description came together. When I get up in the morning to go to school, or after a big sleep-in, my toes touch the soft dark carpet. Very well detailed with accessories and colours. Nicely described George, your room is currently a blank canvas so you can do a lot with it. In my room I have lots of draws and places to put stuff but hardly use any of because most stuff is on the floor. I have separated the metaphors on this page into two lists. The wardrobe is the oldest piece of furniture in my room it was there when the house was built which was a long time ago. These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. And the last of my accessories is the bulletin board. Tattoo Aftercare Saniderm, Once you eyes have shifted again you will see my big, pure white chest of draws in the right hand corner of the room pressed firmly against both the right hand wall and the wall with the window in front of you. But there are some things that I would really like to change like my bed would be better if it was double size and maybe a little bit of colour on my walls would make it much better. I'm impressed with your vocabulary and spelling. You used the right punctuation in the right places and I didn't see any mistakes. My room does not have a lot of furniture in it but the favorite part of my room does and that is my desk it has two skinny shelves next to it. Two beds tucked in opposite corners, each with bedside tables and desks nearby for ease of use. In my room I have my school bags. My bedroom is small but everything fits in it. Jordan Papalia Baby, Kaias Bedroom Then straight ahead you will see my drawers with three pukeko statues and some other items. Also there were some little things like having i instead of I that you could of fixed. I have been in your room but I think you have to clean your room before a gest gets there a ha ha 4. The first one is of peppers that I painted at Lauriston in year 4, that was the one that got ripped off the wall. Great bedroom description Shadyn, I loved how you punctuated your sentences and it made it easy to read, you also have a good use of grammar. R5, It is a brilliant essay. NSL: There were some comma's needed that were not there, and some starts of sentences that were not capitals. At first, I thought you were describing the ocean! Your ideas are relevant Alex, you have described what it looks well. My light shade is a bright red with white flowers scattered over it. I liked your ideas, you thought of ideas then typed in down on your google doc. I like the feel, the carpet, my bed and the size of it. The double bed is messey and not the new. Teatukuras bedroom So in conclusion i have told you about the 4 main points of my bedroom and hope you have got a good understanding of my bedroom. There is a queen single bed covered in a white duvet and patterned blanket in the centre. Whether it be the theme, the walls, the layout or just your favorite item in it. People drive around the neighborhoods to see the beautiful houses lit up. Overall I love my room just the way it is. you also need to indent your paragraphs. My bedroom is exactly the way I like it and can tell you a story about my personality, if you read on you will know about my personality and go for a virtual journey through my bedroom. MY BEDROOM Hats and sports bags under the beds in the dark. My bed is very comfortable, fluffy and soft. In conclusion I love my room as it has a great view, is a good size, my bed is amazingly comfy and the colours are awesome. It all fits nicely in my room and nothing looks too squished. At the bottom of the bed I have a bright red cover I keep it there just in case there's a cold night so if there is I can pull it over my bed for more warmth. Who is the longest reigning WWE Champion of all time? My bedroom is the coldest room in the whole house I wake up with a wet floor because of where it sits. The touch, it's soft, smooth and warm at night. I raced around the corner and opened the door to my bedroom. Until you see that my little carpet paradise is surrounded by pile of mess. I hear it as push all your cloths under your bed and chuck them in your wardrobe. Overall I think my bedroom is nice and comfy, and I like it the way it is. Tropical, Sporty, Comfy, Tidy and Spacious. If you want to read a book from my bookshelf you can, but most of the good ones probably would've slipped down behind it,along with anything you sit on top of my bookshelf. You describe it very well, you could visualize yourself in your room. Except for the Furniture paragraph. Over by the side of the wall is my birth certificate that is framed and it tells me the meaning of my name where it originated from and a paragraph about who I am and stuff about me. MEGANS BEDROOM DESCRIPTION But besides from that it is an awesome room and I love it. A retreat is usually thought of as somewhere thats relaxing and calm. Now I will tell you about the sight, first I will tell you about the pictures and posters, on top of my duchess there is a is a drawing about what the future would look like, I drew in year 5 my mum thought it was a nice drawing so she framed it. The carpet is a soft grey colour with a squishy texture. My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. The bed is the main part of any bedroom because that's where everyone spends the most time. 8. as rough as a cob. I liked how you added a lot of description, like about the wall paper. 3-. Idioms and Metaphors about Having a Good Sleep 8. My desk is white with a blue frame, and is surfaced with rusty foreign coins, a USB and a dusty rubber tiger. Overall, well done Teatukura! I have a COD (Call of Duty) BO3 poster a COD 4 Remastered poster and my certificates of every school I ever went to. The size of my room is around 3x4M and is small but very warm to sit in. The adjectives summarise the tranquil space really well. You used the write amount of good words in the right places. All of this talking about my room reminded me of something, I need to clean it or Ill get banned from the Xbox. Right next to my bed is a little brown, wooden bedside table where I keep my phone, clock and other items. Another metaphor that could be used is, " The bedroom is so messy, it looks like a war zone." My bedroom is bright like the sun. What is walking dictionary a simile or a metaphor? What is a metaphor for a metaphor? A metaphor for a metaphor?! A1: there isn't such thing it is just called a metaphor. A2: Alfred Jarry called it a pataphor My bed is NEVER made properly, (unless mum makes it for me.) My light blue/turquoise duvet has a really soft and warm feeling to it. My bedroom is exactly the way I like it, there is a chair in the corner which is very comfortable. My carpet is a kinda light blue with dark blue lines through it and I also have my rug which has a black background and white zig zag lines on it. Overall I give you a 4. At first I was a little surprised of the state of my bedroom, my wall decorations all still hanging up all except for one little photo. The duvet is black and white patterned with vibrant orange sheets. By my bed there is a book shelf on top it has a lamp and inside it has a variety of books, by the corner there is another book shelf and it has a green lava lamp on top and more books below. I also have 2 paintings on the wall, I used to have 3 but my nephew ripped one off so it is lying in my stuffed toy pit now. It is also nice to curl up with a book or bask in the afternoon sun. I love this painting because of the colours and the way the artist has paid attention to detail. I deposit myself there to snuggle up with a book, stroke my darling cat or simply sit on my bed, daydreaming, soaking up the sacred silence. need for descriptive words. I enter the room and dump my bulky school bags onto the ground. With the midnight black dumbells and tackle bag, race red resistance bands and all my large cricket and rugby bags. I love my room because it's mine. Very well written i liked the word choices and how you alborated on it, there was nothing that I could find that needed work i would give you a 4+, Very good way of describing room. Inside that drawer is where I hold more of my goods and books. I enjoy the fact that everything is very detailed in the way of being described. 4 out of 5. please help! If you said your home was a warzone, you might think it wasnt a particularly nice place to be. My bedroom isn't that big so storage isn't easy for all of the clutter I have. Looking at the wall-mounted shelves next to my bed you can see my reading lamp, my phone charger and a few books. My bed is really soft and comfy, just the way I like it. A typical-sized pond is also viewable, although you must be up much closer to see the timid fish hiding under the pondweed. It is literally a big, black dust nursery because its elevated to nearly touching the roof and Im short. Well done though :-). and there is no conclusion or ending paragraph. I love my room with all of these mashed up colours. To the right of my bed is my bedside table, then my desk and finally my drawers. My big white, tall bookshelf is next to the window. Two walls are a normal bland cream, but the other walls are a bright tropical turquoise, But it surprisingly works! My wardrobe the mirror is all dusty with had prints all over it and inside it has rubbish, all my rugby gear, ski gear and more clothes. R4. The cushions on my bed are very soft and have a sponge texture. The floor in my room is medium sized. SOPHIES BEDROOM In my wardrobe I have shelves for my books and drawers for all my clothes. But on the drawer top is a bit of mess, it holds my phone, a book, ipod and my lamp and behind my bed on my wall I have some posters. Well done. Before long, the divide between work and home is blurred, and you can even metaphorically call your home a workplace because they appear so similar. No i have to go and clean up my room. The ideas are great and relevant to the topic. When I walk into my bedroom I always love that feeling when it is so so warm that you just lay there and forget about everything. MY BEDROOM That is exactly what it looks like. The layout of my room is made so everything can fit. There is also a bit a sporty feel because of all the sports gear. The third most used color is brown as most of my cabinets is that color so I have many bland colors not colorful colors. You were very descriptive when it came to what you liked about your room and what you didn't like. It is a king single and it has a wooden front and back board. My bedroom. My king single bed is positioned against the wall with the big square window and next to that is a white bedside table filled with junk that hasnt been used in years! All you can see is the drive way and trees. Somehow it is always warm with the right temperature. well done, BRIDGETS BEDROOM Can't see any spelling errors good job . I walked through the door and stood still just looking into my bedroom. Johns suggestion was just a Band-Aid for the problem. I wouldnt say that I have a colour theme in my room but if I had to say what colours stood out to me I would say all shades of blue, pink and green. My bedroom. My pictures, my belongings, my personal space. List of Metaphors for Home. JAMES BEDROOM I really enjoyed this story. My favourite was the accessories it was funny. But overall my bedroom is to me one of the best bedrooms in the house. But if I could change one thing it would be to have it all to myself, that way I would be able to sleep in on the weekends. The theme of my room is simply Mine there are no requirements, no needs, nothing it is just whatever I make it to be. I almost feel bad for the things that have slided down the back and not found until the layout of my room changes. It has a stuffed toy pit on the other side of the room as you walk in and it has a shelf above it with more toys, piggy banks, my xbox that doesn't work, my books and other stuff. My animal sketches hanging on my wall and blowing in a winter breeze were only done in black and white. I really liked your description about your bedroom. One of my cushions are light pink and the other one is white. I think that your piece of writing was great! By William Wightman 8WH. Im looking at my animal pillows and paying attention to the detail, their touch is soft like a piece of silk and the zip that's holding the stuffing in the zip is sharp and has a cold feeling. Pagkakaiba ng pagsulat ng ulat at sulating pananaliksik? Thanks for dropping by. Also another way to brighten the room would be to open the curtains. It has a big messy double bed thats cosy and warm with lots of different rugs on the floor. Every morning I need to make sure my bed is neat and tidy. Still have questions? But quite a fun place to fool around. I hop into my cosy bed. They will use and expand upon it again and again within creative writing and narrative writing topics, and there are so many ways to get those creative juices flowing. it is very interesting and the punctuation is really good but you stroll into your room hop in your bed and then stroll into your room again so it sought of jumped around. Usually when I have to make space/ tidy my room I put stuff in the wrong place. I love the way my bedroom is cosy and warm but if I could change my bedroom I would make it a bit bigger and more colour to it. Your mother or father might have taught you a lot of dishes to cook or given you a lot of games to play to help your brain. Behind the white table theres a cupboard that I dont use instead I put my clothes in drawers in front of my bed. Create your own unique website with customizable templates. I think Hannah's story had lots of descriptive words and had good punctuation and spelling. 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